Let's share Poetry!

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ninjinsamax3
1decennia ago
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permalink I just wanted to know if anyone liked poetry; if so, then we can share them; we can also analyze and critique them. :D If there are people who are like that, then I shall start posting some of my poems. :angel:

ohyeah
1decennia ago
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permalink :rock: Wow! I like poetry too!!! I write a lot of poems that my classmates call me poem girl....heheheheh.... :hihi: I'll try to post mine later, I'm too lazy..... :onetooth:

ninjinsamax3
1decennia ago
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permalink Can't wait.

ch0ch0
1decennia ago
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permalink I do :D

bluesweater
1decennia ago
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permalink yay.. me too :high5:

ohyeah
1decennia ago
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permalink :( Sorry, it's too mushy!!!!!!! :oops: [edit]Last edit on Thursday 21 Feb, 2008 at 09:58 -7.4%[/edit][edit]Last edit on Sunday 17 Feb, 2008 at 11:36 +11.2%[/edit]

pinkisssh
1decennia ago
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permalink I like poems. :roll:

ch0ch0
1decennia ago
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permalink The clouds cried, and the skies threw up the color grey.
The mix feelings of pain and my heart throbbing in the pouring rain.

sweetxmiyuuri
1decennia ago
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permalink I love poetry! :D
I can't write them like I use to anymore though. :???:

tenshijanai666
1decennia ago
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permalink

I wrote this one in gym because I was bored...I dont think it all that good! :oops:



I sit here and I wonder
why I do the things I do
why I act the way I act
and I choose the thing I choose
as I sit here and I ponder
through the darkness of my mind
I sit here and I hope that I will
someday find the light
the light that which was seen that
once upon a time
as I sit here and I ponder through
the darkness of my mind
the questions that I ask myself
have always been the same
why do I always make mistakes
and why do I always blame
I never really thought of this
but I’m thinking of it now I wonder
what life would be like if I never was around
I wonder if only then I would come to find
that light the one that I was glad to see
that once upon a time
:oops:

RagdollAlice23
6yr ago
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permalink oooh my!! this isnt bad! I can relate cuz I know what its like when you need that light to pull you out of that darkness! I like this poem you did! ^^

ninjinsamax3
1decennia ago
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permalink That's how I'm always feeling.

A bit too colourful. I think normal colour would be alright, but good job.

I couldn't reach the site for over half a year for some reason... It kept saying it was down on my network. I will post some soon. The poem organization is a bit weird, maybe you can try putting some punctuations to lessen the confusion.

Even if it is mushy, anyone can still post their poems. I really love reading them.

tenshijanai666
1decennia ago
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Quote by ninjinsamax3
That's how I'm always feeling.

A bit too colourful. I think normal colour would be alright, but good job.

I couldn't reach the site for over half a year for some reason... It kept saying it was down on my network. I will post some soon. The poem organization is a bit weird, maybe you can try putting some punctuations to lessen the confusion.

Even if it is mushy, anyone can still post their poems. I really love reading them.


ha ha..srry bout the colour I was bored! :RBohNo:

BeeSilz
1decennia ago
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Quote by ninjinsamax3
I just wanted to know if anyone liked poetry; if so, then we can share them; we can also analyze and critique them. :D If there are people who are like that, then I shall start posting some of my poems. :angel:

OMG I love poetry =D I really love it I keep a poetry book where i write all the poems and then decorate them. Can I see some of your poetry,, and you should join All Poetry its a poetry site, its pretty awesome =D :) :) :)

My aim is to be able to write a poem in Japanese xD that would be awesome

:RBkiss: :RBkiss: :RBkiss: :RBkiss: :RBkiss: it would be so koool xD

What kinda poetry you write?

bluesweater
1decennia ago
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permalink [i]From Winter
To Summer
I Miss You

From Winter
To Summer
I Miss You So Much

From Winter
To Summer
I Love You

From Summer
To Winter
I Love You Too
[/i]

just pass through my mind :RBstickout:

elenko94
9yr ago
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permalink it was nice blue :)

but im to bad at poetry to post anything here :shifty:

giran
9yr ago
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permalink I luv it too!! :lovec:
but I cant write it anymore cuz I dont hav time to write it :RBcrying:

hikariai
9yr ago
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permalink i absolutely love it but my friends call them emo coz they said it have one way or another do with death :shifty: :laughing: but oh wells but like elenko im bad at poetry too ne so i don't think i'll post anything here :)

fyechan
9yr ago
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permalink i love it too~!
but i don't really like the cheesy lovey-dovey type.. :joops:
i wrote on things about friendship, family and life. that's what i love
but at most of the times i ended up singing them to myself... :laugh:
because writing [and singing] is my way of releasing my stress~
[edit]Last edit by fyechan on Saturday 05 Sep, 2009 at 12:06 +7.2%[/edit]

Maltesers
9yr ago
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permalink Wow!!! I didn't know that there's a forum for poets too.... This is nice...

And, I love your poetry... It's colorful too... (LOL)...

Most of the time that's exactly how we feel, we'll never know until we find out why are we doing such things... Just wait and see...


We'll see the light at the end of the tunnel...

endlessagony13
9yr ago
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permalink hhy...
i also like poetry..and i make it.. :boogie: :boogie:
i don't read much literature about poem though...

this is one of my poem

WISH i HOPE

There ‘s a wind
There’s a land
Where i found myself
Without you to encourage me

With a little white that close my eyes
Who am i dare to wish your presence?
It just too cold for me
To stay here as someone who forgotten

Its too fast. its too much
Your lie which tell me to die
I recognize the tone which want me to away
So where will we end on this road?

Your last word still stab me
And leave what i call scar
This tears isn’t act
For you i will die in vain
But its fine by me...

I found a useless wish
on the pile of rubbish
still i take it for my last chance
you see?
For me i still able to breath

There was a love
There was an emotion
Where i’m able to hold your hand
But like life, it die eventually
Doesn’t it?



i also make it as a journal..
i know that i'm not good at it.. :silenced:
but i just love to write it.. :D :D

Hillo
9yr ago
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permalink whenever i look in the clouds i can write a poem in my mind. but for short only. poetry is really good. i like them to specially when it talks about friends and nature

Vice
9yr ago
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permalink Ermm. Hello there. (If any of you guys are still active).
I have poetry!!! It's located in my journal so if you want to read it it's in there. I'll be happy to read/criticize poetry if any of you have any. ;) .[edit]Last edit by Vice on Wednesday 03 Feb, 2010 at 22:11 +2.2%[/edit]

Maltesers
9yr ago
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Quote by endlessagony13
hhy...
i also like poetry..and i make it.. :boogie: :boogie:
i don't read much literature about poem though...

this is one of my poem

WISH i HOPE

There ‘s a wind
There’s a land
Where i found myself
Without you to encourage me

With a little white that close my eyes
Who am i dare to wish your presence?
It just too cold for me
To stay here as someone who forgotten

Its too fast. its too much
Your lie which tell me to die
I recognize the tone which want me to away
So where will we end on this road?

Your last word still stab me
And leave what i call scar
This tears isn’t act
For you i will die in vain
But its fine by me...

I found a useless wish
on the pile of rubbish
still i take it for my last chance
you see?
For me i still able to breath

There was a love
There was an emotion
Where i’m able to hold your hand
But like life, it die eventually
Doesn’t it?



i also make it as a journal..
i know that i'm not good at it.. :silenced:
but i just love to write it.. :D :D



Your poetry is full of emotion... Don't say that you're not good... I am not good either... Besides, we're not writing for someone else, as you said it, you make it as your journal, so we write for ourselves... :) And I believe that you're not here to impress people, you are here to write?! Am I correct?! :)[edit]Last edit by Maltesers on Thursday 04 Feb, 2010 at 03:00 +13%[/edit]

tegoShei
9yr ago
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permalink hi.. I love poetry... :D although I'm not good at it...
But it really helped me a lot! I have some poems in my journal... you can check it out if you like... :D Hope you can comment and tell me what you think about it... nyay! arigatou gozaimasu... anyway... here's one of them..


At this point in time
Life resembles a mime
Things are so hard to decipher
Though I know.. LOVE is the answer

A lot of things happened in the past
Which I thought would really last
But I guess some things wont work
That's why some people ends like a dork

Sometimes I wonder
Why life suddenly grows fonder
My mind started to wander
I guess love is the answer

LOVE is such a vague word
Trying to complicate the world
But.. what if love didn't exist?
Would there still be happiness to insist???


Nyay!! I don't know what to title this one... can you hand me some ideas??? hehe... thanks... :D

Maltesers
9yr ago
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Quote by tegoShei
hi.. I love poetry... :D although I'm not good at it...
But it really helped me a lot! I have some poems in my journal... you can check it out if you like... :D Hope you can comment and tell me what you think about it... nyay! arigatou gozaimasu... anyway... here's one of them..


At this point in time
Life resembles a mime
Things are so hard to decipher
Though I know.. LOVE is the answer

A lot of things happened in the past
Which I thought would really last
But I guess some things wont work
That's why some people ends like a dork

Sometimes I wonder
Why life suddenly grows fonder
My mind started to wander
I guess love is the answer

LOVE is such a vague word
Trying to complicate the world
But.. what if love didn't exist?
Would there still be happiness to insist???


Nyay!! I don't know what to title this one... can you hand me some ideas??? hehe... thanks... :D



:) Sweet!!! This is cute! I'm thinking, perhaps you can call it "LOVE"! :) What do you think?!

tegoShei
9yr ago
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Quote by Maltesers
[Quote by tegoShei]


:) Sweet!!! This is cute! I'm thinking, perhaps you can call it "LOVE"! :) What do you think?!


Nyay!! yeah right... why not call it LOVE... hahaha... thank you so much!! :D

Maltesers
9yr ago
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Quote by tegoShei
[Quote by Maltesers]

Nyay!! yeah right... why not call it LOVE... hahaha... thank you so much!! :D


No worries!!! :)

LiQorishh
9yr ago
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permalink *note: Kenny is a pet dog

There once was a man named Tom Rykuss
Who owned a beautiful ficus
Kenny came along
and did something 'wrong'
Tom had to clean up the crisis <_<"

tegoShei
9yr ago
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Quote by LiQorishh
*note: Kenny is a pet dog

There once was a man named Tom Rykuss
Who owned a beautiful ficus
Kenny came along
and did something 'wrong'
Tom had to clean up the crisis <_<"


did kenny poop??? xD
hahaha

aragonsarinasu
9yr ago
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permalink I LOVE poetry it lets me release my emotions. :)
Here is one of mine but I have more on my profile as my journal :)

I peek over the high wall which traps me here
I swear one day I’ll be free
Bombarding the guard for the key to my heart
I can’t get in
I’m unable to leave
While the guard just stares at me

He watches and waits
Wondering when I’ll explode
But he’s trapped here as much as me
He hums to himself
A sad haunting tune
As I try to find a way out

It’s sad to see
What’s happning to me
As I slowly descend into madness
My mind has shut down
And I’m beginning to fear
That I’ll be trapped here forever

He just sits there
Always humming that same sad tune
It fills my ears
Blocking all coherent thought
That haunting tune

As much as I love it
I wish he would stop
For its adding to my madness
Though I shudder to think
If I ever get out
What I will do when it stops

I’ve halted to think
So I sit in a corner
Glaring up at the sky
It’s always sunny
Devoid of clouds
To hide the sun’s smiling face

I suppose it is nice
To see at least someone
Smiling down
But he’s laughing at me
In my cage

I stare up at the sky
And I can’t help but wonder
If I were the sun would I like it?
Looking down
At the people on earth
Watching our stupidity

For look at us
We’re destroying ourselves
With hunger, war, and pollution

I'm not too good I just love to write :)

KiraOjou
9yr ago
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permalink err let see, poetry is not the best i produce but what the heck, as long as i can show (off lol) my style, i could share a rhyme or two xP

Dancer

scared
hurt
bury your soul

answers are lies

your laugh is agony
the dance has started

i am scared
it hurts
i will be free

the truth is a sin.


Joker

Make me laugh...
Jump! I say

How high?
you should reply

Now tell me
Why isn't my
joker poker
obeying?

Jump! I say
" How high?"

Grin. Im glad you asked...


Boogieman
Crying through my veins
Screaming silently inside my head
Whispering dirty words with toilet

Someone...

Wake me up from this
nightmare

Don't go!
Don't be afraid
Let me fall apart right here...next to you

mastercrow
9yr ago
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permalink Wow, everyone's writing is so good! I love poetry and writing too, so I guess I'll share a couple of mine as well. :) :RBblush:

Veiled Happiness
The voice of summer
Whispers is your ear
Yet your body remains
Cold as the embrace of winter
Darkened by sadness
~Why?~
Your face wet with tears
~Why?~
"There is no reason for it." You said
~Lie~
Your words say, "I'm fine"
Your actions say, "I'm fine"
But your eyes can't hide the truth.


Dream of You
You drift into my dreams
Like the leaves off a tree in autumn
You’re more radiant than the morning sun
More alluring than the silvery moon.
When I look at you, I see a rose
A beautiful red rose among a field of weeds.
Your caramel coloured eyes shine sweetly
Every time I catch your gaze with mine.
But from the dream I am waking up, you are vanishing.
And I long for the times when I can hear you laugh
And when I can hold you closely
Just as the sky holds the moon
Just as coal holds embers
Just as a storm holds rain

tegoShei
9yr ago
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Ame no Uta

Do you hear it? Do you feel it?
The rain is talking to you!
Can you see it? Can you do it?
The rain is cheering you on..

Rain kept falling like teardrops.
Gently and slowly it falls.
How wonderful it feels to be under the rain.
But we don't seem to see what's deep within.

The trees are dancing.
The winds kept on blowing.
The waves go crashing on the shore.
Together they harmonize and create a wonderful song!

We could sing and dance with the rain.
How magnificent and magical it could be.
The rain is so meaningful.
Yet it remains a mystery.

We couldn't hide anything from the rain.
It knows how happy or sad we could be.
We could cry and smile with it.
The song of the rain is a great company.


>>>TegoShei<<<


eyramhaye
9yr ago
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permalink i love poetry..i also enjoy writing some...

i actually find writing poems easier than straight words and just posting them like that..

kabutovanucrut
8yr ago
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permalink wow...it's really..
i can't say something to figure it...
it's really amazing Poetry..
:jcry: :hroll: :joops: :laugh: :love: :totallylove:
:otsu: :otsu: :otsu: :otsu: :otsu:

Chibininja
8yr ago
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permalink Clear blue skies greet me.
Clouds playing in the azure.
What a pretty day.


Just a quick little haiku! I absolutely love poetry!! :lovec:

Jacobreed
8yr ago
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permalink ok well i have written a lot of poetry but here is my best work

In the first month of spring,
all rain
In the second month of spring,
all rain
However, in the third month of spring,
you see it
birth of new life
both human
and plant
you've just witnessed
your first perfect blossom


let me know what you think

sinabunz26
8yr ago
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permalink ii love poetryy.. ii write a lot too. ii'd post some...but ii'm at myy aunt's house and myy poetryy notebook iis at home... :(
maybe later???? iif ii remember that iis lol.

Immerherz
8yr ago
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permalink I write some, but I can't say it's much. I prefer stories instead of poems, lol XD But I've posted some of them in my journal ^^
Haven't written anything in a while, though... Because I had no inspiration. Usually my "inspiration" comes when I'm sad... For some reason o.O And I don't mean sad as you are usually sad, but I mean sad as... For more than a few hours or a day ^^ If you know what I mean? XD

Missa
8yr ago
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permalink @ Immerherz i know exactly what you mean... i love poetry and am actually very good at it but the last poem i wrote was over a year ago, i wrote a series of 5 poems they were my heart and soul spilled out on paper they told of a misery and sorrow so deep but i have since ended the relationship with my ex and found someone who loves me just as i am... the trade off for my happiness is i have no pain to bring out he emotions needed to write my beloved poems, it burns but i cant just keep myself miserable forever so i can write.

the 5 poems are posted in my journals and titled as follows:

Beautiful Damage
Depraved Indifference
Agonized Silence
Self Inflicted
Radical Freedom

Jacobreed
8yr ago
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permalink A Perfect Blossom
something everyone looks for
but, few ever find


In the rain there is dark
in the sun there is light
but, in the soul it is always light vs dark


The vision of the soul
requires a free mind and body
then needs complete silence to open the
gateway to the soul


and last but not least


Honor, something everyone has
but also something almost everyone,
loses



these are some of my latest works...

Zeeppo
7yr ago
378,518 jpops
permalink I like poetry

There once was a very small Clown.
She was born on the wrong side of town.
It always made her fell down.
And was why she always wore a frown,

Zeeppo
7yr ago
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permalink This is my favorite Poem

Ode to a Gold Fish
by
Anonymous

Oh wet pet.

takumiusui
6yr ago
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permalink hehe i like poems too, actually i created a topic for them in socialize i didnt see your gomene~ v.v
hehe but now at least i can begin to share again, here is a sample of my work <3


shadows
behind a veil
hidden
behind what we knew
masked
behind what seemed perfect
never to be imagined
the raw reality of of it all
what was never to be thought
now into the light
paraded infront of imagination
thrust before heart
killed before dreams...

takumiusui
6yr ago
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permalink heres another~

light
smiling faces shed hope upon me
over shoulder
over heart
to be one with my dreams
the time has come for me to fly
on my own
on wings of belief
wings of trust
in my self i shall trust
out of calamity i will
i will
rise...


O:) O:) O:)

darksama
6yr ago
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permalink ok here's a short one...

life... a complicated word
muttered by all...
some never understand it,
and some pretending like not care,
see ppl all around u...
they're telling u the story of life,
without us noticing it...

Zeeppo
6yr ago
378,518 jpops
permalink Fuzzy Wuzzy was a bear
Fuzzy Wuzzy had no hair
Fuzzy Wuzzy wasn't fuzzy
was her???????

Asia1
6yr ago
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permalink I write poems since childhood, you can see some in my journals.

takara
6yr ago
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permalink ok, I like Poem.
Can anyone guide me how to make up a poem in english?


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